Nice chapter. Well with the suspense and eerieness, perfect action sequence, though I thought the transformation sequence either the first or second time should be REALLY detailed, like it is in most werewolf media. You haven't shown any vampire powers yet---made Benjy(pardon me, it's very catchy)look defenseless.
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Whoa. A bit blood-frenzy, don't ya think?
ReplyDeleteNice chapter. Well with the suspense and eerieness, perfect action sequence, though I thought the transformation sequence either the first or second time should be REALLY detailed, like it is in most werewolf media. You haven't shown any vampire powers yet---made Benjy(pardon me, it's very catchy)look defenseless.
ReplyDeleteGood job though. Keep it up.
Great job!
ReplyDeleteNice sustained action! Love it!
I'm working on more!
Let's both keep moving forward!
WOW. Benjy didn't do a thing but cry and look weak. Where's his mean, sexy side?
ReplyDeleteI like it. A good read.
ReplyDeleteYou need to update the Red-Pool page.
ReplyDeleteya i do need to update it
ReplyDeleteben's ummmmm sexy side comes next chapter
KY!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI SHOULD'VE GUESSED!!!
IT'S NOT STEAM'S FAULT!!!
What happened?
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