Hey
Well Chapter 5 is comming along.
It might be out tonight or tommor.
Day one of my revision is comming to an end.
Your suggestions have been tacken into account.
The chapters are slower or faster. Detail has been added,
and my surprises will be less hinted at.
Tommor or the next day chapter 5 and 6 will be out.
Along with a new and revised set of chapters.
Things will have changed and I will put the set of chapters up on other websites.
The story will be new and inproved. So you might want to read them.
How ever, rough draft chapters will be posted on at a time on scrib
The others will be posted 5 at a time on other places.
If you rather read day after day then great.
If you rather read 5 chapters every week great.
Tell me what you think about the revisions wednesday or thursday.
Thank you.
Bye.