So I will post another chapter today.
And maybe another one.
If you haven't checked out my story please do.
I am open to any comments, bad or negative.
(as long as they show thought and explain.
Don't write a post if you just don't like me.)
Well thats it for now.
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I like it. I just think that the wolf encounter kinda dragged.
ReplyDeleteHURRY MORE CHAPTAS PLZ!!!!
ReplyDeleteYeah Ky, more chapters!
ReplyDeleteyeah it did drag but I had to make it a whole chapter because if I didn't then chapter 2 would be about 8-12 pages. Anyway any ideas on how to fix the slowness?
ReplyDeleteWell, to stop the story from dragging, fill the story with detail. A story oozing with detail and topped with a great plot is one you must be sure not to miss.
ReplyDelete@TheAbstractMan I saw your story, though it seemes a bit like an old soap. This clearing up any time soon?
Good luck Ky. You definitely want 2 get more readers as I told TheAbstractMan, by posting your story on as many communities revolved around writing.
ReplyDeleteI eagerly await the next chapter!
Ugh.... waiting for good stories takes so long....
ReplyDeleteI'm with ToPOraph on this one, spread the word, te story's great!
Anyone know any other good stories on blogs/sites?
yeah some more sites would be nice. And the old soap clears up in chapter 5 almost there
ReplyDeleteThanks ToPO on that. Yep, Chapter 3 will pick up the pace. I'm trying to post my story on as many places as physically possible.
ReplyDeleteKy is doing well, I hope? More chapters, eh?
I know a good story......
http://abstractjack.blogspot.com
Awwww.....now we have to wait for Chapter 5.....
ReplyDeleteWhen's the next chapter coming out????
ReplyDelete'and another one' sounds good.
ReplyDelete30 mins or less
ReplyDeleteITS UP
ReplyDeleteif you want a series of of chapters read or not just tell me your email and i'll send them to you
ReplyDeleteSTALKER!
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