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Sunday, February 21, 2010

CHAPTER 3 IS HERE

Finally.
Chapter three is up.
Check it out.
Here it is.
The old soap has been removed.
And there will be blood.
Oh the irony.......

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6 comments:

  1. R3BEL_KILLA_696February 21, 2010 at 9:15 PM

    There was blood....

    oh the---

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  2. TheAbstractManFebruary 21, 2010 at 9:24 PM

    Kind of a DEAD give away.

    I think it kind of went from super slow to way too fast. Can you find that perfect medium?

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  3. KyFebruary 21, 2010 at 9:32 PM

    Thats how it starts
    The medium comes in chapter 5
    The start is like that chapter 5 is medium
    Yes there was blood

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  4. ToPOgraphFebruary 21, 2010 at 9:32 PM

    Well done. You have now brought your character into the world of LIFE SUCKS.

    I have to agree with Abstract, though I will say this: Vech kicks butt.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2010 at 10:14 PM

    Way too fast...(dizzy)

    kind of obvious and not a great setup as to the point where Alec goes missing, Vlad feels bad, Vech acts weird....then it all as suddenly comes together.

    2 words: SLOW DOWN

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  6. KyFebruary 22, 2010 at 8:05 AM

    thanks for the comments
    yet i need to know
    what do you like better
    fast or slow?
    My medium will be on the fast or the slow side

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